hmm.. not great
okay, I got some advice for you, not trying to be offensive just trying to give my opinion
- I know its a frame by frame animation, but some tweens could help.
- a faster FPS would help alot
- better storyline, two guys fighting over a girl seems rather unoriginal, if your not going to have a story line have a good joke
- artwork was good, the palm tree background was well drawn
- spend more time on it, a faster, longer fight would of been much better, I know it would take like a million frames but thats what flash is all about
- some more little things, sound effects and special effects would be great, like flashes and things when the light sabres hit together
nice work anyway, sorry if I sound like some arrogant know it all, im just saying what I, a veiwer, would like to see, so im speaking as a veiwer not a animator, personaly im still in the trying how to make a stick man walk without him looking like a zombie flapping about ^_^
on a other note who are the HH? it seems another clock crew clone
Ive got nothing against the idea, but the clock crew idea was good, and the lock legion built upon that, having clocks for faces is good, and the locks are good too, but when it came to what, the 4th copy when they have a picture of a hanggun for a face? and a peace sign? thats just lame, no offence, but seriosly, a gun for a face, whos bright idea was that?
ps. well done :)