pretty good
it was pretty good but it needs better graphics and alitle more violence and some humor and sound sorry im giving you 1....
Author Comments
This episode come prior to the events of the actual series. It was my first animation and only came out so well. This took a lot longer then it should have, and didn't turn out quite as expected. But regardless, I've come to accept my first animation. I will be trying to do better in the future of course and will stick with the series.
Link: http://www.deviantart.co
m/deviation/37883742/
This version of the animation flows better and is in better time.
Pretty good
I liked it, a few things I would fix are the perspective in the picture, when the main char was walking down the hall, at first I thought he was walking down the wall untill I realized what was going on. The voice acting was okay, that could have been done much better. It was like there was no real feeling to it. Other than that, this was real top notch. I like where it's going and will look out for the next installment.
Nice movie and good detail with the faces
the movement on everthing ell was a bit wierd but overall it was a good movie.
Well Done!
For your first animation, that was really good! The ending confused me a little, but I hope you submit more, and I start to understand it a little more :/
Also, I notice when she walked, her hand was misplaced for a little bit. Well, good luck with this!
good animation
i still cant believe this is your first animation you did really good but im wondering is this like the first animation you sent to newgrounds or first animation done cause it really confuses me but hope the series goes well even though i dont understand the words in the begining but i guess well find with other episodes ok hope the series goes good for your first animation
