Score: 10
"I'd like to see more of your story."
date: November 24, 2009
To joshviera13, this author can take their time with part 5.
Emotionally speaking, this is powerful. I cannot truthfully say that I come from an abusive home or drunkard parents, but the sympathy I feel is no less real.
Take your time with part 5, or stop all-together, whatever your choice, be glad of it, and move on.
If you do continue, I'd prefer that you'd take your time with it. It would be better that way.
I'd really like to see more from you, however. But as a patient man, I'll gladly wait.