Score: 8
"ter installments, the surre"
date: November 25, 2006
Watched the series a while ago but never bothered to review (shame on me). Am doing now partially because apparantly folk who like my submissions also like your series. Also because you explicitly ask for reviews. Anyway:
+++++ Memorable, to say the least.
++++ It all makes me chuckle.
- In the intro, I noticed the buildings scrolling past sometimes pauses in the centre. I believe this is because the starting/ending frames of your loop are identical. Make a keyframe one frame before the end, then delete the last one, to get a seamless loop.
- Limited graphics in the thing. It'd be nice if you scrolled down when talking about the b/p points.
-- I did find myself wanting a link to the profile. Good to see you included those in later editions!
- I don't like the pixelly font that much against that background.
+ Border gives it some personality.
+ I like the radial graphic for the pre-loader. Very precisely drawn.
==
Though a lot shorter than later installments, the surreal idea and the writing carry this.
