Well this has a really meaty storyline so i have to congratulate you on all the creative juice that went into making this. The graphics were pretty decent, i mean you were able to draw a pretty simple, yet cool looking main character. The part that let you down, was probably your voice acting, now i thank you for taking the time to do them but you really need to work on putting some real acting into them. Overall this looks really promising.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)