Score: 4

"Good start"

by: fei-long3

date: October 18, 2006

forgive me for saying this, but i see so many "holes" in your work. it is a good start for future movies that you'll be making. you have the talent; you just have to shape it, trim it, and hammer it like iron while it's still hot. kinda like making a sword. or, better yet, making a diamond. you have to attain that "perfection". in order to do so, watch other sprite movies, not only here, but also on other sites(don't know where, but i know there are A LOT of them). another thing to help boost your talent. be a director. i know you are laready, but you have to "FEEL" being a director. you have to be strict on your project, and prevent mistakes at all costs. put your hear into it, though, because if you don't, it'll look crappy no matter how "perfect" your flash movie is. it takes time. no worries, no need to rush. practice makes perfect. must have a long and captivating storyline to make people watch your movie more, kinda like attracting people to buy your stuff ^_^. Last, but not the least, looking forward for your next work. i bet, it'll be "100% better" than this one.

Score: 8

"uhh i dont know what to say."

by: azndude536

date: July 2, 2006

that was kinda ok for a first movie but i m going to have to give u a 2/5.it wasnt very good.just keep trying k . :)

Score: 7

"Heh, nice job."

by: The-Protagonist

date: May 31, 2006

Pretty well done for your, I guess, first movie. Grats, man. Make some more. 3/5

~The_Protagonist

Score: 10

"Sweet!"

by: Willianatiortrio

date: May 29, 2006

but i really suggest you take off the guy shooting at the loading part and also it says in your profile that your 14 (and you say your not) then it's 2006 already, you can change it into 13 again.

Score: 10

"Well done"

by: Xerub

date: May 29, 2006

your only in sixth grade and you did such an awesome job

WELL DONE