ok intro 4 a story

good flash but story is way to childish and boring u should definintly keep making flashes but make a better story + way to short even 4 a intro.

pretty damn good for a first flash

people may say this is a stupid flash dont let it get you down i know lots of people whos first flash consited of a stick man being wherled around in a tornado looking like hes smokeing himself in the balls repeatedly for computer sience class:P good job man you have talent build on it also i gave the violence so high cause well he got knives and shit hurled at him:P and humer at a 10 cause well i just had a knife thrown at me a few days ago so i can relate hit me just below the if you where wondering:P

Really?

This made it through the portal? Not to be rude, but the animation wasn't that great. You had a good drawing of a dragon, that was pretty much it. Otherwise, anybody could have done that. Nothing new, or original. Shouldn't the football pop when molten flames are spewing out of his nose?

not long enough

what else would happen if you had a dragon for a neighbor? animation could have been a little better, and it could have been longer, but what was there was funny.

Nice try

It was alright, voices make things seem alot better. Maybe some non-diejetic sound would be good too. The drawing was nice, but the animation wasn't smooth. Keep at it!