Great!
This was a great animation short! you should made more! But why were Jeff's arms on his neck?
Author Comments
Jeff and Dex are friends that are always out to prove each other wrong. In the first installment, Jeff bets Dex that he won't drink a load of Pop Rocks and Coke. It's semi-short, but big things come in small packages ;)
**I'm getting a lot of bad reviews because of the voices. I'm only 13 and therefore cannot sound like an adult, and the characters are kids also. Just thought I'd let you know.**
maddog125 responds:
Hey, thanks for reviewing! For the arms, it was the easiest way to make it.
Hahahahaha!!!
SWEET! Keep mak'n them.
maddog125 responds:
thanks!
Finally, Something I can laugh at!
Lol that was pretty funny. I liked the whole part where he blew up, But when the guy shouted out "Nooo!" well it kind of killed it a little. Anyway nice flash, this kind can go far. More detail as you make more episodes please, thanks.
maddog125 responds:
Thanks for reviewing! He was actually groaning because there was blood all over him, but I can fix it.
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consept is good, the sound is good.
Here is what needs work
1)blood needs fixed badly
2)length
Also there is a few minor details iin te art but that will be ok.
so i gave it 4/5 mostly for sound and i like the story.
Also the below me halo ignore him ok.
need anyhelp i will be glad
maddog125 responds:
Thanks a lot, I appreciate it. Hopefully the next episodes will do better.
this was not a good movie
the sound was good, but everything else needs A LOT of work.
-halo
maddog125 responds:
Please explain why?
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