well this is my first time seeing the SBC with eyes though i think you must have used the correct voice!!!

Very well written some of the lines were good for a quick laugh and it was funny to see SBC with eyeballs for once his voice however wasnt using the correct pitch

fuck this

this sucks 9ner6you

K

^^Good Points^^
I kind of found the last line "if you are a boy between 4 and 9..." to be pretty funny. The way you drew SBC was pretty unique...I've never seen him with eyes.

^^Needs Improving^^
That Microsoft Sam voice just doesn't fit. You really should have taken the time to get Speakonia and use that in order to make the voices. I think it would have had a much more positive effect on people had you done that. Also, the "Welche's Juice Girl" text doesn't make much sense.

Umm...

+COMMENTS+:

I like the sound, I guess... the font wasn't bad, and the effects on the two text objects weren't bad...

+IMPROVING+:

First of all, that is not StrawberryClock's voice (even though I didn't mind the sound), also, this is offensive to StrawberryClock, and it barely has any animation. You need to try harder than this!

0/5