((( VERY NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressed wit this flash, mainly the "ART WORK" in the characters, great use of coors and great depth from the backrounds, to the props to the characters an all around great flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much to improve on tis as its eally great as it is, the only thing i could think of is make more like this and longer it was great stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash with tons of effort, a flash that should be seen by all, a great submission to newgrounds...

~X~

Briefly entertaining.

Great flash, but I wouldn’t want to watch it a second time.

Graphics: Nice and smooth. I especially liked the wolf and the glow the fire gave off.
Sound: Good Native American music. The voice of the chief was authentic.
Style: Great style.
Violence: None needed. Great without it.
Interactivity: Has a menu. It also has a play and pause button.
Humor: OK. I got the joke that the chief is giving his son all these family heirlooms and then gives him a modernized house. I laughed the first time watching this but didn’t the second.

It was a nice addition to the portal with brief humor and sharp graphics. It was boring to watch a second time but that might just be me.

4/5

haha

more of this kind of thing!

i'm gonna take a stab and say you're a fellow britlander, very bitish comedy.

(just looked at your profile; by donny do you mean doncaster?)

Good one!

The animation is AMAZING!!!!!!! But a little more action and longer would give it a 5+++++++++++.

(Ps. how did you animate the smoke? Or is it something secret that you want to keep for yourself? If you can please tell me how you did.)

Good animation. Bad ending

I loved the animation, and the story had me getting involved. However, this felt like a cop out. It seemed like you started something that had the potential to be amazing, but then said, "screw it! I'm done." I would definatly like to see some longer works from this author.