cool

it's a good movie

bad

get a preloader!
not many people want to stare at a blank screen for ages

First submission, not bad I s'pose

I guess I know too few 12-year-olds, but I thought your flashwork was pretty good for your age (that sounds really condescending, sorry). Looking forward to the sequel. I give 'er a VI.

Um

That was an alright flash its just I hate sticks but I wont bump you down for that.
PLEASE if you can make a button to skim dialog that would really help some moments I was staring waiting for the next text bubble. Thats my only real problem

Not bad

Well for a beginner it's quite good, you have some potential for someone your age. Don't let the general idiot population of this site tell you otherwise.

But I don't see how a movie that short would take up 3Mb+, unless the music is really badly compressed

Anyhow, that aside, try and complete your film and submit a full copy and we'll see what happens.