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World War II Event

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Ok well, this movie has sticks figures in it. I can do better then sticks but its just more time consuming. What im looking for is reviews telling me what i can improve on. Thank you.

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I actaully liked the sticks, they were all well drawn, exept for the grey ones. However, the last scene went by way to fast, and i coulnt tell what was going on exept a green thing (a grenade i supose?) lands on the floor and the screen goes red and everythings is spinning. Yeah it sounds like an acid trip.

So basicly you need to improve on your basic animation. i dont mean anything spusific, i just mean like little handy tips and tricks.
I would recomment you stay with that style of blood, as it was pretty cool, and the style of sticks were fine.

overall, ok work

great

screw yo EAB this is a great flash amazing sounds nice production i give it a ten

well..........

well it was too short but it was kind of interesting

Improve on this--

Ok, so for starters, it wasn't that long. I notice on your entry that you said you can do better than sticks, so do it. Putting time and effort into a piece is worth it--especially on here where people will pick you apart and criticize everything. Beef this up a little with a longer animation, more fighting, maybe Hitler or something to give it more story, and a little more time in constructing the figures. Overall not bad though. I enjoyed the fight scene, but then it just abruptly ended.

poorly done walking cycles.

walking looked too static, very good effects though. consider making a new one with people, not sticks, because sticks are cliche. I actually like stick movies, but I also agree theres waaay too many out there. blood looked too "streaky" make it flow more like blood does. good all around, but I just didn't like it all that much.

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3.14 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 12, 2006
7:18 PM EST