not bad
an interesting teaser. i personally didn't find this teaser to be very exciting, but it does have potential to be a good animation if you work more on it.
i look forward to seeing the finished flash.
Author Comments
*sory I couldn't send this to ALPHAS, there was a constant error*
This is my first big project underway and I think its going to stick, give reviews and tell me what I should improve on, please don't start hating this as Its just one of the few movies Iv'e done.
NWO-Striker responds:
yea, i've improved alot by now, but when I made this it was really crap, I didn't optimise sound, didnt trace bitmaps, made it too slow. Anyway, I've dropped the project and went straight into making a Quake 4 insired flash FPS game.
right.....
hmmm.. that was prety bad.. but seeings how you said you havent done many flash ill give you the benefit of the doubt and watch for the the real thing. i really hope its alot better than this.
not much happend
teasers dont do out, if you realise this(the teaser)due to its lack of length and plot at the moment it would probobly get banned, listen to us,
DO NOT SUBMIT TEASERS.
Meh. Nothing happening.
Teasers are meant to tease. This does nothing. This shows no interesting and creative plot points, and no exciting action sequences to grab people's attention.
Try not to make a teaser unless you've made most of the movie already and just need to take a few more weeks/months polishing it.
No effort involved.
0/5
Me brains
I could barely stand watching the whole thing. I was clawing at my head to force myself to do so. Everything took way to much time. If my brains wasn't trying to get out of my head I could literarly remember every image you showed. The music was the only good thing since it seemed to be in beat witht the showing image(again I could barely tell, me brains). You made this game look bad.
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