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update, click read more for junk about the easter egg
c: commentary on/off
quality: H M L (im sure you can figure that out)
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after reading your reviews, I realised I put the wrong swf file up, so heres the new and better one. Enjoy
In execption of the date
RandomFlicks told me to check this out. I looked at the date of submission so i'll take that into account, The animation in some places was "Shoddy" and mixed of example.
"When he(the character) was smashing his head on the desk, it seemed to bow before the character even hit it!"
Also When doing characters try to draw a next for points of rotation and it makes the character stand out more if the characters outta lines are thicker than the things in the backgound.
now thats the bad heres the good, the song chosen was a good song for what i guess you can call a story line but yes animation is pretty decent for a first animation good job. I found the easter egg it was quite charming. I also like the menu bar around the screen.
Well i only watched it once and thats all i have to say
I take into account you are most proberly better than this now(because i was reviewing it like it was back on the date) but yes i hope to see more from you
-Macbeth Animations Inc.
Well first off Im wholeheartedly amazed to see well written out constructive criticism in a newgrounds review, which is sadly becoming rare.
Back when I made this, I know I was capable of making something allot better, but 3 days didn't leave much headroom, although I do have to say the fact that this is my only fully completed flash to date really makes me look lazy, but theres always looking back via my sheezy gallery to stuff thats pre-dates this (the horror) right up to some junk I put up yesterday.
But its always nice to look back at your old work and see how far you have come.
Once again, thank you for the input.
This is a very nice first submission and i found the easter egg at first i thought it was on the calander but then i paused it and looked at wat the button sed and then went through the movie and found it in the commentary(no going to reveale its location) nicely done and yes the menu bar does look alike to the SFB menu bar but it's nice and you might want to put more thought into character design i know you gonna say "You havent even got a submission you No0b" But his neck is very stubby well i believe ive sed my 2 cents
what is this character design you speak of?
Hey, I found an easter egg...
but the easter egg didn't do anything...
Had fun tracking it down though...
behold the power of tab.
please read the description, it explains everything, the easter egg DOES work, I know. I tested it and I know of several people who really found it. and useing tab is cheating :P
Good job man
It was really good cept the stuff went way too fast for me to even realize that it was saying something important at first. I didn't want to pause and ruin the song but it was good none the less. Rock on.
man, that would suck. Its pretty hilarious.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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