good

well you see

yeah it was'nt bad for a first episode , was a bit short voices were a little hard to hear maybe step away from the mike a little because i did'nt a single word of what yoda said
and also is it just me or does the info screen look somewhat famiilier

Good

Good storyline but some bad things I noticed were...

1. Voices hard to understand (especially yoda)
2. 3 armed trooper (and he was stroking? The map
3. Shoulda been longer even for a 1st episode

Good luck with the rest of the series I'm looking forward to them.

Jumbled

I suggest buying and reading Star Wars: The New Essential Chronology. It's a good book with a lot of information on the films and the expanded universe. Playing through Knights of the Old Republic once on the XBox doesn't make you an expert. The Clone Wars happened about 4,000 years after the Jedi Civil War. Revan and Malak have been dead for a long time.

The animation is inconsistent, and the sound is quite poor.

No offense but...

Ok, if you are going to make a Star Wars animation, you need to get your story straight. Malak and Revan lived some 4,000 years before The Clone Wars so they can't be in a time period with Clones, which were not around until Episode II. You have to stick with the Tales of the Jedi/Sith War/KOTOR era, the prequel era, or the Galactic Civil War. You can't ala'carte this! With that said, decent graphics, the sound is way too loud and Yoda can't even be understood.