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This is my debut film. Please enjoy. I said ENJOY DAMN YOU, ENJOY!
What the fuck was that?
It's just an animation of a child getting a ball and picking it up from the road. Seconds later, he gets hit by a car. How bloody crazy... I'm going to give you 4.5 stars.
But a little too simple. The only part that made me laugh was the fact that you "starred" in it
this is okay
The animation of the guy walking was good, that was the best part of this flash...a guy chases after a ball and gets hit by a car, pretty simple story. Man, that car zoomed by really fast...no wonder he was so messed up. The ball came out unharmed...it figures.
drawings were simple but okay, but there was no music or sound efects, and the overall plot was determined before even watching the plot. For a split second I thought "maybe he's gonna surprize us and not have the kid get run over", which means you do have good timing here, but in the end it was still just too predictable to be funny.
He has a point
Syds got a point in saying it's predictable. I read the title and I just imagined your flash movie in an instant. The only difference is that my image had things on the side of the road. Also it had sound and a pleasent screaming before being run over. Use this vision I have provided you with and make a good flash movie next time =)
A short film about a park bench
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