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Joey's Story ep. 2

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Nov 22, 2005 | 3:23 PM EST

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( This is all FBF but the bullets from the guns
so tell me what you think of that! )

A small project Im working on for our studios
this is episode 2
( we are working on episode 1 now! )

Tell us what you think of this series
-Justin
And the music is by zakk123 ( check out his music in the audio portal! )

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XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

((( COULD E IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could be improved. the animation wa sok actually kinda smooth, the volume seemed abit low though, and the backrounds were abit bland as were the characters aswell, its ok but can be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like with the characters, eyes and mouths, and some backrounds would help more details showing more then just the lines...

~~OVERALL~~
A good animation but can be better with some detailing...

~X~



Big-Dat-FazBig-Dat-Faz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not too shabby

This looked pretty good. I suggest a few things can be done for the next episode. Firstly, as previously said, you should lose the casings from each bullet, but you've noted that, so I trust you'll fix that in the future. Secondly, the graphics look great, but the flipping needs to be fixed somehow, or at least have some more mobility in the body if possible, such as when they jumped. It didn't look right when they jumped without crouching first, or rolling over each other. Also, I think the bullets seemed to have entered and left at different places in the victims' heads. But apart from that, it was very well done, and I can't wait to see what the next episode has to offer. Keep up the good work.


Smoke-Tower responds:

Thanks for the tips im already working on the 2nd episode...

-Justin :)
thanks for your vote!


Dark-LaydeeDark-Laydee

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Sa-weet.

I dont know bout the rest of you, but I pretty muched enjoyed that. Awesome methods of violence XD!


Smoke-Tower responds:

thanks mate... some people thought it was stupid because of the random ness of violence....

yeah...

well thanks for your vote the next episode is coming soon

-Justin :)


LukarnisLukarnis

Rated 1 / 5 stars

A step above sticks...

This submission shows that you don't need sticks to beat a dead horse. Dodging bullets, shooting people, and doing acrobatic flips.
The matrix, in my humble opinion, created and destroyed flash movies for all time in its own special way.
But enough about that...
The police car randomly showing up at the end?
Ok, the guy takes out a gun that he apparently had the whole time and could have used earlier?
This flash made it through the blams somehow I guess, but I'm not sure how. It doesn't seem to offer anything interesting or unusual to the mix. It just repeats a few old bits and uses blob characters instead of sticks to do it. The sound wasn't bad, the blood effects were acceptable, and the bullet movement was tweened which is probably best. You could have tweened more of this though.
All in all, not impressive in any aspect.


Smoke-Tower responds:

well fuck.... just... -eye twitches-...

SHUT THE FUCK UP!
LET SEE YOUR FLASH MOVIES YOU LITTLE CUNT!

YEAH THATS RIGTH! YOU PROBABLY CANT EVEN AFFORID FLASH SINCE YOU LIVE IN A BOX BEHIND K-MART!

-Justin :)
and plus.... if you make a better flash then me....
Ill take back what i said..
But now you can just fuck off and go hump your boyfriend!


IceDragon64IceDragon64

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Not quite there yet

Some good style. Obviously not much realism, but it has a Matrix weird quality.

Police siren would have been good

Make a background and I might pass it.


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Smoke-Tower responds:

well i sortof added a background like.. a wall and a ground but i didnt add much detail into it because i wasnt focusing on the background as much... and i would have added a siren for the police car but i didnt find no good ones....

-Justin :)
ill update for the siren later.. i guess