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My first stickfight. Every guy/girl if you will has to make one
((( DECENT MUSIC )))
I thought the music fit the animation well, the sticks were ok but wouldnt mind seeing some sorta real characters, but if your gonna use sticks make them abit thinner or something, anyways fun animation you have here...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...
Decent animation of a few sticks and battles, and some nice music to go with...
Mingepaste is right, do somthing original
Animation ran like fluid, it was fantastic. But the concept of battles is overrated. I liked the music, but not suited to what I feel you wanted to capture..
Quite honestly, I'm sick of Stick battles. They've been done to hell now - and there all the same - sorry.
Music was wank - i don't know why people keep putting heavy metal music in there flash - - if you put on a different type of music - one that would give in a little more drama - it might be better. Heavy Metal does not give any thing to flash movies - theres no drama, no feeling in them - sound is 80% of a good movie. If star wars/indiana jones etc didn't have there themes the wouldn't of been half as good.
Also - if you don't put heavy metal in your flash it will be more original than any other thing on here!
Your animation is really good though. People that write on here - the graphics suck - can eat shit. Your animation is very smooth and works well. Just try somethng new - sticks suck balls.
Keep it up
Hey, preety good movie you got there... just a few words of advice, to help your flash skills come along...
Improve the graphics... they were a bit shoddy
Add some more effects... maybe like when it goes into slow-mo, make the background blur to emphasise the slow motion effect
Add some blood effects!!
smoothen out the animations...
Otherewise not a bad attempt of a fighting movie :D
I liked it, should have made the boss a different color
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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