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This is just a trailer of a flash video what do you think?
GET A LIFE
Yeah, no offense but this is like one of those things i imagined when i was in second grade
well it was my first flash and i tried unlike some people you see on newgrounds
Wow... where to begin.... hmmm... i think i will start with elves, NO, TOO MANY ELFS already, second, "when elf dies his soul is merged with a blade" blade = braod term (kitchen knife lol) and worst prt is, living in a blade, wtf slef awareness but not being able to do anything all you get for the rest of eternity if to be swung around at people and crtures, or be left on a shelf, or be bumped around next to some sweaty guys ass on a long and perioulous journey.worse tan hell. three wtf is with the appaantly stolen sprites of that blue wizard with teh fireball, .. i have wayy too many probs w/ this flash, and btw, WAKE UP FROM YOUR ANIME FANTASY WORLD TO FACE REAL LIFE!
thanks you this helped me alot got me thinking on the story ad the show so thanks for this rant thanks to you my series i hope to do won't be so bad
good trailer but...
the guy has a see through eye and theres a few spelling mistakes
Ok. In terms of graphs and style, this was decent. You actually put effort into it, instead of making a stupid crappy two day's work animation.
On the other hand, you need some work. Practice makes perfect. You need to check the spelling of everything, otherwise people will blam you. A lot. Change the sound to suit the action, and speed up the rate at which everything happens, so it doesn't make the watcher feel like he's going to be there forever. Overall. I gave this a 3.
I see that you tried to create epic anime straight out of the box. Well I have this piece of advice for you friend: Start humble
The worst thing you can do when starting something is to think beyond what you can do.
Your graphics show promise but you are yet to master Flash.
The audio was incredibly monotone shoegazer crap not suited to an anime.
Think all of this through before finishing
Keep up the good work
p.s Kai doesn't mean anything in any lanuguage
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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