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Aug. 2016 - reuploaded!
Not too bad.
Unfortunately I didn't watch the entire thing. It freaked me out. But I could tell if I watched all of it, I'm sure I would have given the same rating.
I didn't understand what the random pictures were for. The ghost in the hallway of lockers and the sillouhette of a "lady". Once again, if I missed the reason at the end I apologize.
But to be honest, this reminds very much of some of David Firth's darker works? Is that where you got the idea? If, so, I believe that you did a good job following the whole suspense genre unlike some other lower quality flashes I've seen. Great job. Maybe someday I'll work up the guts to watch this one all the way through and see the sencond one when it arrives.
it was kind of an experiment, the next chapters will clear things up. thanks for the review
though it said part 2 not 1.Plus you could've made more scenes with what he was saying.
what do you mean? thanks for the comment though
If i was you, before you work on the second one, i would practice with different animation attempts, and write out a storyline, you can draw, you just have to learn how to animate your drawings a bit better, for instance the part with the car, remember, cars don't take up the whole road, and houses are bigger then cars T_T... anyways, feel free to email me if you have any animation questions or whatever... good luck...
haha actually i did that... i have some concept drawings and script written down. i knew about the road and house thing, i guess i was too lazy... thanks for the review though, it really helped
I thought the begining had a pretty good idea in it with the boxes and all and the style (the forest part) is really cool but then suddenly that tv intermission just got on my nerves because it is an annoying sound by itself.
try watching the shadows more, for example it doesn't have to be in a different colour it can melt in, probably be more scarrier.
after about 40 sec I lost all sense in the storyline, I know it probably makes sense to you and that there is gonna be a part but still...
p.s. something is wrong with the play buttons but they work and it's just a small thing
thanks for the review
It waz "ok" .......
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