I see some potential here if you were to possibly extend the length of this series, add some more content or possibly work on a completely different story and put more effort and length into it. I would recommend some clearer sounds as I could hardly hear what was being said. Not bad at all, just most people who watch this are gonna be saying "what the hell?" when it ends so soon. I know I did! Good luck on future ventures.

It's short but I like it. You should add more to it .

it looks ok. lol at the derka guy

heh, if ur planning making this into a feature length flash, go for it, it has so much potential. I've always loved those geico ads, so random and funny. Best line 'do you have insurance on this thing?' lol....double lolol.

SLOW IT DOWN!!! i had trouble comprehending what was going on.