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This is my second submission (much better than my first). It is a intro to my site I thought I get my opinions from you lot at newgrounds hope you like it.
You didn't improve much on your first flash... I watched it and then this... and I might like the other one better. At least it had movement.
One question... Can you spell?
From my recollection, there is an S at the start of STUDENT.
ok now wth...
wth was the point of that? spelling "STUDENT" with a bunch of meaningless scenes in between... that was very..boring... u could have atleast made it faster so it would finish quicker. i wish you would make things that werent so... short and with a wrap around... i didnt like it just repeating.. lol i didnt like it period...sorry
Wow....I don't usually start my reviews off like this, but, wow...
There was no humor, no preloader (though admittingly there wasn't much to load anyways), no violence, and barely any real style.
Maybe I just don't get it. Maybe there's more to this film then just the word Student being spelled out while random pictures are repeated on a white background....boring...or at least it is to me.
However, you did do some nice animation work in there. You can use that on future projects, except with more to it. I know it's only your second, and I'm sorry if I'm coming off to harsh.
Just look at it this way, it can only go up from here.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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