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Hopefully, if this passes judgement I will make a series of parts following the story.
Please leave constructive reviews!
That was cool, but you scared me.XD
When that thingy popped out of the darkness and made that noise I was like,"WTF."
But yeah, nice story line.
Heh, sorry about that tofu :D
Thanks for the review! But now I hate you. Because your flash did better than mine.
(that was a joke by the way xD)
good flash,the story,i didnt understand maybe i wasnt listen to it,i like the graphic nice colors and effect...
For part 2 I will make sure the story is easy to follow and understandable.
Thanks for the review.
I am lost!
Did this have a reference to a game that I don't know about, or maybe a movie? I'm sorry to be harsh or anything, but I gave it a 1/5 because of pure confusion. The graphics were all right and the intro was kinda cool, but I just don't think it should get a better score than 1, sorry.
"I am lost!"
I must be doing something very wrong with the story then >:/
Ok, I honestly had no idea what the hell was going on there. The graphics were smooth (though too basic to understand what was going on), and the audio was alright, but that's really all it boasted.
If you improved the graphics a bit, maybe it would be better, but for now, I can't really say too much good about it.
I'm sorry you didn't follow the plot, but still thanks for the review.
Next time the improved drawings should help you to understand what's going on.
a good idea
a good premise but the "battle" looked really weird and i dont understand what happened the animation kinda sucked which brought down everything else if u had just worked on the animation this would have been good but this is biasically crap with a decent storyline
Definately the least helpful review but what can I say?
"Look out for part 2".
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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a clock day story
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