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This is my first finished flash, made for a friend. Previously there were some problems at the loader. I've fixed the loader and also optimized the sound for better file size. I hope you enjoy. (I will try to answer constructive reviews).
((( OK )))
First off you may want to work on the file it was abit large and takes awhile to DL. but anyways the flashw as notbad it could have better "SOUND" quality to it though, notbad stuff just needs more work on it...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would start with the size then some more effcts...
Interesting flash, abit big in file, and the sound could be better but notbad at all...
The sound was terrible with some kind of electric background noise that totally interfered with the movie. The more I turnd it up, the worse it was.
Please fix it and I think it would be pretty good.
actually, that "electric background noise" was the song :) It's static samples to make dub (Pole=great band) but unfortunately if you don't have headphones or bass boosters it seems that you lose the bassline and can't really catch the rhythm of the hisses and pops...
But about it interfering... thank you for the comment, a few others have also mentioned that the atmospheric sounds crowd out the voices
not really good
that wasn't too bad, but it was boring and the sound wasn't good. but i'm pretty sure you could do some cool movies.
thank you, as I responded to the first reviewer, I learned quickly that I need storyboards and better planning. My next flash is already storyboarded and I'm going to work on the timing better so it has a more engaging pace.
Damn good for a first submission.
It got boring at a few points, and through most of the movie the music made the voices difficult to hear, but it was a good movie, all the same. I rather liked the ending.
Thank you... as you might be able to see, making the flash was like taking an uber-tutorial... by the final scene I was a bit more into the flow (though with a ways to go yet, I know)
I didn't like it :-\
The sounds was too quiet, i could hardly hear what they were saying, it was too long and drawn out, i just lost interest in it before it started really, so you should work on it, but the animation was pretty good with you
thanks for the comments. I had others mention about the sound also. And I agree that it was a tad drawn out... I learned a lot while making my first flash, one of the first things I learned was the importance of storyboards o.0
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