Not bad
Very random, yeah i love stuff like this. Good job.
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I don't know what I was thinking.
Not bad
Good concept and decent style.
There should have been a better plot but
I can't even right a good plot so good job!
I've seen better
but it didn't suck... next time try to add a story to it...
Hmmm, interresting, and has potential...
Good, the many of the shapes were kinda straight, you know looked like you just used boxes and lines to make most of it, which is okay, but your art don't really improves a lot from that, so watch out for that a bit.
Anyways, graphics were alright, looked like you cut some corners here and there, but that's alright, to a certain extent, which you kinda just got at.
Not bad! ^^
I agree with XwaynecoltX, that it was a kinda try plot, and I think you should add some more humor in some way, maybe a cameo, or something funny in the background which is completley irrelevant to the story.
Maybe something while the gnome, or whatever he is, is flying to heaven, something could happen, but in case you watch Simpsons, you might not want to make an obious rip-off ^^
Anyhoo:
+5 stars for the animation in general
+3 stars for the humor
-2 stars for the dry-like plot.
+1 star for a gnome being the "bad guy" ^^
7 stars and a 4 vote!
wow
these first flashes on ng make me feel so like, pathetic. ='(
btw-WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! gkjdfgjkdfjg!