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This is the first episode in The Little Buzzers series. For more, visit: http://www.littlebuzzers
This is really cool.
I like this a lot. But to make it even better I think that you should use little to no text at all, and instead use facial expressions, movement, symbols, and pictures to illustrate what's going on. It will have a really neat effect when paired with the sounds that the creatures make, which should not be overdone because they're brash and annoying as hell… For instance, think of when Sedrick was telling Duncan his plan to capture Greevil and throw him off of a cliff. There could have been a “light bulb” to show that he had an idea, and then a little text bubble over his head depicting a small animation of them carrying out those actions instead of boring, old text. When Sedrick was saying that Greevil was “evil,” he could have had a thought or text bubble depicting Greevil with devil horns, a trident, and a tail, just like your everyday-run-of-the-mill Satan. Then Duncan could have patted Greevil on the head and had a text bubble showing Greevil with a halo and angel wings. When Sedrick wanted to kill Greevil with the cleaver, instead of saying “Don’t hurt him!” with text, Duncan could have moved in front of Greevil to protect him from Sedrick.
Also, this is clearly not for children. Anyone who says that is uneducated, ignorant about parenting, and determined to make society worse than it is.
Thanks for the suggestions, they are very good ideas. To be honest, I had actually considered just this when I started out. I went the other way, as it were.
Thanks again for the review.
If only this was released when I was a lad :D But I've watched loads of other cool stuff. Kids would definitely like this. Is this series going to continue? How about brokering a tv deal, and get it on, so children can watch it?
Now that would be awesome.
I have plans to broadcast these guys in the future, but only once I get enough episodes to make a 22 minute pilot.
cause you know, hes green... and evil
People tell me: "Classic."
the caracter are so cute,the graphic are good the story not bad,good flash...
Glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
I've watched and reviewed every movie you've made,and i must say that you did good.
Thanks for being a fan! (heh, like I have fans *rollseyes*)
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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