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This is my first "real" flash. It is part one of a series written by members of my forum. God only knows what will happen in the next episode.
((( DECENT )))
This was ok, but could use some more detail and better drawing base, more shades and colors aswell, also a few backround effects wouldnt hurt either, this was notbad and seems like you put lots of effort into the script, but art does need some upgrading, nice work though hope to see more soon...
yes...that was great...doesn't matter if you can draw or not...because that just makes it better...I hate the perfect ones..so yours gets to be one of my favorite flashes...yay...haha...too bad he was wearing the wrong body suit :( -Autumn-
Ladies and gentlemen...my girlfriend.
Ha...you thought that review was just a little too nice, didn't you?
kind of boring
i was stunned at the graphics, or the sound. it was kind of boring...it seemed like you were trying to make an action packed movie with flash...and that just cant be done... i got bored fast... and usually it would be good to have some truth in these...and him sleeping on the wing of a moving plane just is not right..
Certainly not trying to make an action-packed flash...
Actually, I kinda thought the opening scenes came out ridiculous and extra-cheesy...
And, yes...I know that no one could sleep on the wing of a plane. That's why it was (supposed to be) funny. Get it? Because it implies that he's so bad-ass that he can...oh nevermind...
Keep It Up
At last a First flash that is not short Looped or a tacky stickman.
For me the story was boring but i thought for your first flash it was very good Keep It Up
See...finally someone gets it...I may suck at drawing, and our voice actors may just be whatever friends I could get to come do some lines...but at least there's some scope to it. You gotta hand it to me...I think big...
this is ma' new fav. flash!
if u stop making these, ill make sure u expieriecnencen(cant spell)
A FATE FAR WORSE THAN DEATH!!
Worse than death? Will I be forced to watch my flash over and over again?
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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