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You have been a good student up to now and I am glad I could teach you flash to the time your movie is accepted, Although you got really lazy with it and left out the part about poilice and the transexual drug dealer, the score would have been better if you got that stuff in, You don't need to make every one of your movies a series though, thats kind of lame.
As I said, keep it up, but don't get lazy with it, It's not a race.
((( IT WAS OK )))
This was an interesting lock movie, i like how you made it into a gangster mafia like setting, and the story to that was ok, but a little hard to understand at times, but still nice to watch. The animations were detail niced, and you had some good backgrounds, i liked the way you did your action scenes a lot...
Yeah thanks i hope you stay around for Chapter Two: its still nice knowing some one has some decient reveiws of somthing and yeah i like my back rounds too lol :D
Pot Pie =D
The review name makes no sense, just like this movie!
But anyways, it was well done graphically and I can tell you are pretty decent at flash, but try to put a little more time and effort into your movies.
This was way to quick and very hard to understand
It makes sence if you played the gam
I voted 5 and all, but
You're making the Lock Legion look like Piece Of Shit Legion. Stop submitting these crappy LL movies. Seriously, ever time a guy like you submits an LL movie, more people will think negatively about LL and start hating it. So _PLEASE_, practice ALOT before submitting another Lock movie. I beg you. Thanks.
IM not realy hearing you are you saying you like or it sucks or pratice more?
It was good except for that the whole story is stolen from the game mafia..... if you manage to change the story it will be better rated...
Yeah i didnt realy steal it i thought it might be cool to re-make it in a LL movie well yeah
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