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what the its allserious u could have added something awsome

okay

The graphics are not the greatest but they sure have a style to them. voice acting was decent.. but could have been better. you did a great job showing different perspectives. Overall, very fun to watch.. it looked like you improved your drawing as you proceeded with animating this. nice work.

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Well this could have had more to it, but it was nice to watch, i liked how you drew your characters, and the effort in this was decent...

Maybe next time you could make your animations more smooth, and make the sound a little more clear, because it was hard to hear, its pretty decent so far...

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I think you should use a different storyline

Otherwise, I liked the style of the characters, and the voices

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Not bad at all, voices may need a little work and it would be nice to know what effects the bleach had on them. Good music.