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My first flash here on Newgrounds, I did it as a school assigment for my sister... I hope you all like it!
This isn't a bad flash, but there should be more to it. I enjoyed the inscription on the headstone, and your overall style is pretty good. However, the feeling at the end is "where's the rest of the story?" Expand on the idea and you'll have an awesome movie on your hands. Good work.
Thank you! and the next one will probely be longer!
yeah there's no "what" in "watching", but you put it there, both literally with the misspelling AND figuratively. When the credits rolled, I blurted, "what!?". It looked as though it was setting up for something and then it ended before it even began! Oh well I guess if it was just for an assignment I cant be too stringent here. I was especially disappointed because this had a good style and I was looking forward to see some animation (other than the explosions there wasn't any animation). I just get frustrated when there's build-up and then nothing happens in the movie.
Good start though! You have style. Make more movies, but maybe next time include a middle and an end to go with your beginning. :)
Yes I know about the misspelling, I have changed it on the original, englich is not my first language, notes taken, my next one will be longer hopefully! Thank you!
I like it.
This is a very interesting flash, liked the plot. I do wish we could have seen Death go at it, but meh, leaving it to my imagination makes me smile. I liked the song as well. Animation, superb for a first flash. Hope we see some more from you.
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
For a first flash...
That was really damn good. The drawnings and the graphics were beautifully done, the animation was fluid and crisp and the overall effect and mood of the flash was just mind boggeling.
Thanks for the great entry
Glad you liked it all and thanks a million!
not in the conventional nice, but as in nicely made and what not. I really like your style. Longer would have been nice, but I guess we as humans always think bigger is better. It was great anyways. I hope you are happy with the results
Thanks a bunch! It came out allmost as I pitured it allthough some scenes are missing that where never done, so I am pretty happy with the results and that is thanks to you and those who took there time to see it! Thanks again and Iam really glad you liked it!
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