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ok... ithing that it was really wierd maybe but it was good and it had a good story but i dindt catsh on the story telling cause i dints understand that piny voice...but i say it was ok to me

Wow...

Wow.... thats all i have to say. Lets see here... the story sucked...the voice sucked... and whatever monster you made sucked.

I really wanted to like this

There is a lot about this short film that I really enjoyed. IT has a great look and good material. The comedic moment of the ship zipping away? I could have done without that but it was the voice...that Alvin and he Chipmunks voice, that really ruined this for me.

Put down a new voice track and you will improve this by leaps and bounds. The animation is solid and the art itself is wonderful. The Seawolf reminds me a bit of Lovecraft's "Depp Ones".

What the heck was with the voice!?!

That is an excellent peom/story, howerver, the use of the high and barely understandable voice detracts from the "horror" feel. As a matter of fact, it pretty much bastardized the entire thing. FIX IT. Maybe your own voice, a deep voice sound effect, or maybe a friend with an ominous sounding voice. Again, other than the voice; good.
Love,
Me.

cool

cool! i liked that:) that vois made me smile;) and grafics was cool! i liked your style:) nice work dude keep it coming!:)