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I made these both for fun and for my VCD assignment. Sorry if the sound isnt synced properly, I tried my best.
Reviews are appreciated
Waste of your time mate
Generic floating bodies with 4 balls as appendages characters, slow moving story, and almost completely unreadable white text at the beginning. And no, it's not my monitor, (both laptop and deck computer agree) it's a bad choice of font color. Just go for black text at day and white at night. Seriously, I wouldn't have even known there was text had I not heard the sounds.
The first one wasn't even funny,...and I just finished the second one and that wasn't even that great either. And using generic screaming sounds lost it's taste way long ago.
Allow me to be a bit more clear when I say "slow moving". One of the keys to presenting comedy is TIMING. You need to learn this and get a good sense of timing in order to step upto the next plateau of flash humor. Looking at your rotating penguins, you could be really good at some hyper-speed FBF flash comedy.
Looks like it's also time for you to upgrade from the n00bish looking character design. Go for some limbs!
Ok I'll try and step up my work a bit next time
Thanks for the review
VERY short skits, but they were both alright.
this was a nice lil' flash, but it was pretty long and drawn out, the animation cheap though i know it is in that style, and quite anoying sounds. Another thing nobody can read white on yelow background dumbass, but i loved that explosion at the end!!!!!!! made it worth not blaming i guess... - - - - - and its not two, theres NOT TWO MOVIES IN HERE DONT BE MISLED!!!!! - - - - -
I think the white writing is pretty readable despite being over the sand, maybe your monitor is crap.
And yes there are two movies, didn't you watch the one with Link?
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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