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In Part One, Sir Redham tells the story of how he found his squire. Sir Redham gets into a fight with the innkeeper and ends up being thrown out the window. Hope you enjoy! Thanx:D
Pretty damn bad...
Sorry man but it was.... It had no style in either art or story, horrible sound as it was computer voices and intro music that doesn't go with the theme at all, horrible made sprites and animation for graphics, and none of the jokes were that funny except throwing out the window which cause a little smirk.
If you going to make 2 and want to make it a 3 you are definatly need voice acting, some kind of music that goes with the theme, a story that actually alot more funny (maybe better voice acting would have made the lines more funny), and better animation. Though if you want to be something that might actually get this story noticed a bit you going to need alot of work.... but it was a good attempt and it looks like you can make it better if you put the time and effort into it.
well thanks for the advice, but voice acting was less convienient so i used a text-to-speech program instead. It only took me a few hours make so next time i'll improve!
Pretty bad but kept me watching
Yeah all and all this was pretty awful. The graphics and sound were all very sub par. BUT it did somehow keep me watching so Ill give it that . I actually look forward to a sequel . Just a fun thing to watch . and i dont hate the computer voices only cause i think a lot of newgrounds flashes do shotty audio.
It was lengthy; thats also admirable
well well,.. how do i explain this movie
Bad Grahpics Horiable intro music and worst of all COMPUTER VOICES if your going to make more get rid of computer voices, also lip syncing to the voices wuz bad the graphics were bad the story might of been mildy intresting if it wasnt so painful to look at and listen to, also CHANGE your intro music it dosent match the story and is really really bad,...
Erm watch it?
it was good
Thank you, Funky Clock! My good man:D
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