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my first animation
I enjoyed the facial art of the characters very much, however, the animation was a bit choppy (however, given this was your first flash, and you've undoubtedly improved since :D ). The story felt abit detatched. Man investigates. Finds the cause- but then??? You know. Just kinda a cliffhanger, but not the enjoyable kind. Overall was pretty well done.
the only problem was that the guy goes into the house. If a real person heard gun shots, they would run like hell insted of saying "I'll go investigate!'. other than that it was good
Hmm... I really don't know what to say.
This really does NOT qualify as noir. Noir doesn't just mean black and white.
That aside, I think you chose very suiting background music.
I like the way you drew the characters but you didn't do it justice. It was like... like you did this in paint. They didn't move smoothly. The rough style made me scream - seriously. This seems like the kind of movie that should flow... I think.
I hope that you redo this movie and put more into it, because it has potention. :)
glitchey twitchey :S
Good choice of music
For me, the music made this animation. There is nothing much of a story here, and the script isn't up to much. It looks like a first animation and while I did like what you were trying to do, it was obvious. There were parts that seemed to drag on - watching a poor tween make it's way across the screen takes it's toll.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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