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my first animation
the only problem was that the guy goes into the house. If a real person heard gun shots, they would run like hell insted of saying "I'll go investigate!'. other than that it was good
Hmm... I really don't know what to say.
This really does NOT qualify as noir. Noir doesn't just mean black and white.
That aside, I think you chose very suiting background music.
I like the way you drew the characters but you didn't do it justice. It was like... like you did this in paint. They didn't move smoothly. The rough style made me scream - seriously. This seems like the kind of movie that should flow... I think.
I hope that you redo this movie and put more into it, because it has potention. :)
glitchey twitchey :S
Good choice of music
For me, the music made this animation. There is nothing much of a story here, and the script isn't up to much. It looks like a first animation and while I did like what you were trying to do, it was obvious. There were parts that seemed to drag on - watching a poor tween make it's way across the screen takes it's toll.
Stylish, but pointless
The style, the artwork, and the music set the mood for a good noir. But there was little to no story. A nameless guy walks into a building, finds dead body, gets shot. The End. Again, the style was great, but it needed a story.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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