wow... thats garbage

no really, that was like 30 seconds short, there is no plot, your bonus menu is crap, you could not even think up of an original name soo you call it fitch.....moron!

I don't like doing this...

I never like to flame at people, but there's no reason to post a small clip of something like that. I could understand if it was like in a commercial form. You know, like a little flash movie prequel to it. But not this, take this thing off of NG and stop wasting everyone's time.

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you have something good.. but please dont fucking post something that isnt completed. The art was good, the sound was good, and if you kept on the same track i bet the humor would be as well. Fucking finish it first tho, then post it, until then, i dub this a 0

Oh for crying out loud!

I KNOW I'm not the first to say this, but Newgrounds isn't meant to have a short 30 sec. preview of a flash that isn't even completed yet and should have been completed prior to its posting. If you want to have better votes and reviews, finish this THEN submit so then people will have something more than this to go on which will only get you spite and eventually BLAMED.

What the hell is this?

Short and incomplete, even for a preview. It has a little potential, but this flaming turd belongs off NG.