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My first real flash... just sit back and enjoy it.
Could use some improving
Hmm ok so it took abit to load even with a somewhat small size of film, now nice job on the "MUSIC" and even "SOUND/FX" this seemed very short thoough, i was watching as i was reviewing and it was over in a gunshot hehe, but anyways good music some ok characters you had in the scene, just way too short, if you ask me i think the loading part took longer, and since you do have good characters here and even music, along with some decent backrounds, it could have gone longer with more stuff, more scenes and even more to that story, cause it started off really good. also i think the "GREY" backround with the credits could be a more brighter color, or if its too much to do all the work in making a full on story, try and make other short clips and put them along with this to ad more of a short few clips kinda like a collab of sorts and such, well just a thought or two that could improve on this as it was abit disapointing, but like i said it can be improved to show more of the story and all, Really good choice of music though, and as short as it was i did like it.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a few things mentioned above like, more story, more content, characters scenes and so on, and also change up the grey backround for the credits to something more brighter.
Too short but good quality and a start to something nifty
Drawings could have been better, but were decent, story was pretty cool and entertaining overall, but the animation was a bit lacking, especially in the lack of realism when it comes to the man falling without his body going limp or anything after getting shot, and the guns smoke could have been a continuous stream rather that two spurts.
What was the point to this?
A guy with a red right hand orders a beer and the sherrif says that hes bothered the town for the last time, then he shoots the sheriff, that was it, there was no story whatsoever, this flash really needed some, you had the graphics skill, just no story skill. The animation needed a lot of work as it was very poor, why do you think I haven't submitted anything, it's because I'm only this good in flash(excluding graphics in this style).
Decent I guess...
What did we do to you to deserve that?
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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