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This is not a Test 3: SFX
Good story, decent graphics
Hmm ok notbad of a flash here, the characters are really good, lots of awsome design great use of color and a number of awsome detail to go along with them, I did notice a few things that could make this even better though, such as, it could use some "SUBTITLES" also a play button at the start wouldnt hurt either as it just starts off right away, the story itself is pretty good and you had some ok "EFFECTS" but thought there could be more enhanced effects aswell, like more sparkles, more gradients like fire stuff, you did pretty awsome with the characters and shades, and overall it was a good story here, so i really had fun with this, you should ad a preloader with a play button at the start, that was the big thing for me, But anyways i enjoyed this flash eventhough it was a tad older good stuff all the way through.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The movie starts right off so you may want to ad a play button, This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here, adding abit more enhanced effects would also be a nice touch.
Now overall this was a good flash nice story, could be improved with a few touch ups.
It was good where it left off after the battle in the desert and there was still some good action in this episode and the animation looked a little better than before,nice work.
The echoey sound effect on the voices was a bad idea, I think that it really lowered the audio quality a lot, the line quality of the drawings looks really craggy, but overall the drawings and animation are pretty, good, I can't really comment on the story, cause I can't understand what they're saying iwth all that echoey shit, but overall it was fun to watch.
Not bad, but it felt way too short. What was up with that "vote high for more" ending, right as the action was starting to get good? Not sure why you decided to end it there, instead of continuing the battle. The graphics were fine, although the animation was a bit choppy. The sound had an odd echo quality to it that I didn't like much.
It wasn't terrible, but I think you could've done a lot better with this episode.
lol i cant believe you want high vote with these movies!!! if this movie gets high votes every movies should get infinate. im sorry but make movies more use ful. this was rubbish graphics, movements and sounds. im so sorry but this is awful...
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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