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Another Generic

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Yes...well, I just made this. took me around 12 hours, counting the trip to run errands. TELL ME WHAT I DONE WRONG. I know there must be something...

Edit: Wow...I can't belive that people actually liked this movie. And everything you people said is stuff I considered while making it, and just so you know sound at all was just an after thought. If this is the kind of responces that I can get, then I will definetly be making more movies. Thanks, all you people!

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good shizzle...... but it could be better

yeah.... great show.

the loading thing at the start fully confused me to the extent that it nearly got closed before it started.

liked the flash itself.... altho it coulda bin longer and had some more blood n stuff in it.

let ur imagination go wild

keep it up

Generic, but not badly so

Well, you did say it is a generic stick fighter, but Ive seen far far worse. Like many have said, some snazzy music would make it better, but overall very nice. Looking foward to your rant, hope you can leave sticks out of it though >.>

Sweet

You do stick figure fights justice.

AWESOME Nick :)

Nick this was AMAZING you're so talented! I'm so proud to be your neighbor! lol <3 Rach

ok

Author's comments:

Yes...well, I just made this. took me around 12 hours, counting the trip to run errands. TELL ME WHAT I DONE WRONG. I know there must be something...

My comments:

alright, i shall tell you what you did wrong: it was way too short, could've had a little more action to it, and it could've been without sticks.
i'll also tell you what you did right: it had some good action, despite it was little, your efforts were alright, and it was average for a first animation. i suggest you have a look at some tutorials and also check out the audio portal for your audio as well.

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Faves:
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Votes
15
Score
3.77 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 28, 2005
10:46 PM EST