Yikes

Ok. at the beginning, where the words are all scrolling across? You might want to have someone look at your next one to check your spelling. At first I kept thinking that was part of the whole thing and it would turn out to be important later or something. Also, it was hard to read, blurry, you know?

All in all it's abvious you worked hard. Next time it'll be better.

Heh

I quite like this actually. Although the drawings could have been improved, the designs of the spaceships, characters and so on were good and creative. Also the animation was pretty nice in some parts. Yeah, some parts were a little rushed looking, but I know animating does get a bit tiring. And that text on the intro at the start was prtty difficult to read. It all looked like one big loooong sentence. Maybe having it scrolling star wars style or having it appear in sections would be better.

hm..hmmm ..

Oy, first thing - your grammar. Maybe use dictionary :)
Then, drawings are poor.
Also the main problem of new artists is a bad choice of PoV (point of view).

Good, Good

Good attempt...very good for a first flash...

Things to improve: -Shadings
-Better, more detailed drawings
- More action

I gave it a 3 on the charts

Average

Spelling - Terrible
Plot - Pretty Poor
However a good first attempt at Flash, keep it up :)

But one question - thats a robot empire controling the world? They seemed to be defeated quite easily!

But anyway i gave it a 3 on the charts and a 5/10 overall.