lol
nice stunts!!!!!!!
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please enjoy the movie and vote fairly.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Pretty good but bad stunts.
Pretty good for a beginer if you are.
And the sound was pretty good.: (
Meh.
Reasonably funny. Pkay for a beginner, which I assume you are.
sh4w responds:
A beginner? I guess I am. Thanls for the review
Advice.
It seems that your work is extremely influenced by rob Lewis, both in form and setup. You have a nice start, but should probably do the following next time.:
Faster pace, some those stunts should not have taken as long as they did.
Create anticipation..music, sounds..'character charisma.' make crowds or something.
Get rid of that god-awful splat sound, use more sounds.
Have a richer background, it doesn't have to be magnificient, but solid colors just don't cut it.
Fundamentally it was a good stick animation, there are just things that need to be improved upon.
sh4w responds:
Thank-you for the helpful advice, I will definitely take it into account. You're right about being influenced by Rob Lewis, I have been a fan of his work for several years.
Boring
The first stunt was promising, then it went downhill after that. And whats up with that "splat" sound effect, very kindergarden.
sh4w responds:
A lot of people say that about the first stunt, I don't know why. I didn't spend any more time on that one than the others.