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UNFINISHED tell me what you think so far

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Finish it

Im grading it according to where i think its going. Tinker with the sound quality and the graphics a little more, and ull have a great work. Look forward to the finished piece. Hope you finish it well.

Looks like it'll be fine (send it to NG Alphas!!!)

Dude, remember the NG Alphas? Submit it when finished and shurely you'll recieve better scores. Also, it's a bit too vectorial and rigid... but i guess that's your style, isn't it?

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It looks really good..

But all unfinished work NEEDS to go to NG Alphas, ya twit . XD Sorry, for that reason alone, I voted zero. Nice movie for what it is.

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Has potential

Looks like it will be cool, if you keep the style that you started the movie with.

Also, it is very irritating as a viewer to see unfinished videos.

i think you should finish it :)

do you really think that this is enough to get proper feedback? i sure dont. you can obviously make some good stuff, but this so far is waaay too short and pointless to judge. no story line, its about 15 seconds long perhaps, and really, nothing happens.
you should have atleast made 30-40 seconds worth if you wanted to submit an unfinished version.
5/10
(THE THUMB: sideways)

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Score
2.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 16, 2005
10:47 PM EST