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this is one of my first flash movies so its not very good
ps - pls be gentle with the votes
here are some ideas
well dude, to tell you the truth... it wasn't THAT BAD, considering it was your first. but, hey, you can always do better, by making it longer, a wee bit more realistic (maybe some blood), and of course there's always the surprise element. i'll give you an idea: if you plan to do a remake, or maybe a series (who knows???) I suggest you put, like, after some fighting, an option to choose who wins and stuff, and even maybe some : "extra endings" or even a purple guy coming out of nowhere. Is up to you. Just remember, try to be as original as you can.
smell ya later dude
not bad for first time, the black guy should have been bleeding though, that would have made it kewler heh :P
keep it up you'll get better
better than your other one your getting better keep it up and you'l be great
well it is your first so not too bad, still it has somthing, the animation was decent, but still too short, well not bad for your first, keep up the quality...
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