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I will be continuing this soon

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hmm!

Don' bother continuing, it would only be a waste of your time and ours making/watching anymore of this crap!

Pointless

Character is copied from Roly-Poly-Oli. Well drawn, but copied. The voice is stupid, the music was a bad choice, there was no plot or sense to the movie

Use your talents to produce something original, funny, and good. This was a waste of time.

haha

isn't that a disney character? i don't know what the hell she said.. the blink182 song was lame and random... graphics were alright.. but the plot and voice acting needed work.

5

The idea of a person, or machine for that matter in a quest to get pie off of a shelf is not exactly what I would call revolutionary. What is interesting is the somewhat epic feel that you are trying to convey, especially with the music of music, to perhaps say that that it, the pie, is unreachable. You really should not of rushed so much, your character design is really nice, and with some work, could be great. The idea is fun enough, spend some more time on the plot, and continue this until it is really finished.

Ryan

uhmm

yeah

Credits & Info

Views
1,995
Votes
10
Score
3.94 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 4, 2004
5:33 PM EST