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This is my first (submited) flash! (everyone says that) Its not amazing but it isn't as shit as some stuff on newgrounds. Ill not tell you to vote high (though that would be nice :) please review it! I want to know what people think.
I gave you a mercy 1 overall
I would've put 0 but at least you we're making fun of babies that can't eat.
Not bad for your first entry. I am a fan of stick films, and this was one of the better ones. The window was a bit small, you might want to make the sequel bigger. (There IS going to be a sequel right? :-) Also, slow the action down! It flies through it so fast, you lose most of it the first time you watch it. (I had to rewatch it twice to pick up on everything.) That's my biggest complaint. The sound wasn't great, but it wasn't bad. I did think the girl falling at the end was a cool touch. I liked that. :-)
It's no XIAOXIAO, but I still enjoyed it thouroughly. I normally vote low for stick films by default because 9 times out of 10 they're pure shit, but you had a point in your response to one of the reviews, sticks are good when used correctly. So far, this is one of the only stick films I've actually liked. Nice job, keep up the good work.
it was cute in a spastic kind of way :)
that last guy is right. It's just a crappy version of XIAOXIAO
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