ok

it was ok...i guess

This has potential!

You really have somthing here! you could do a little series on this, but you'd have to spice them up.

good job

Totally Underated!

this is, well, quite excellent! a great new style of flash! funny to the core, not what i expected when i saw the intro, but was definetly a pleasent surpise, make more, maybe even a little bit of voice, but that could ruin the style, argh! i am rambling on, anyway, keep up the great work!

I think this could make a decent series...

I think that a series like this has potential. I thought that the debut episode was quite good, although the paedophilia worries me - It might be best to cut that bit out...

I like the style of your drawings to, so good luck to the series.

i hate to see nice graphics go to waste.

you need to get a decent story to go along with the obvious talent you have.