OMG THATS THE SAME VIOCE OFA THE INUYASHA THINGY

Wat the 'ell man? Are u like stoned all the time seriously...lol im jp it was alrite put u need 2 find a better drawer and vioce thingy...lol but it was kool. Keep up the good work! ^-^

((( OK )))

Well it was ok, kinda funny with the very large laser of some sort, while the voice thing was ok, it could have been better with some emotion, anyways nice job kinda funny...

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eh...

i am usually a fan of locks and clocks, but this was kinda boring. i've seen the same bit in regular cartoons on tv since i was a kid. there's so much more that can be done with a giant laser. have some fun with it next time, that's all.

u can do better make longer and less predictable

spend soem time on this i know its a long grulling process and be origonal u get better ratings for being origonal

you're capable of much more/better!!!!

there was only one background, and it was just a picture of a telescope!
come on dude, you can do far better than this...
there was hardly any animation needed what-so-ever, as you didnt even have that little dial thing moving around whenever a lock was speaking.
so next time, make sure you make a movie that requires some real animation, some better voices and some real backgrounds!!
overall score: 4/10
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