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(Disclaimer: To all you rednecks out there, I'm a big one myself, so no offense)This was my first attempt at creating a flash toon. Its not very long. I wanted some feedback, so please, feel free to review ;)
this was really awfull and that is such a heap of crap that its you r first toon btw just so you know every one says its my first toon go easy this it not your first and redknecks are a bunch of right wing assholes
it is just ok!
not bad but try to have more people involved in the story! Keep it up!
Overall it was just flat. The one drawing of the redneck was pretty good.. The lip synching was well done, as was the voice. It was just kind of boring.
I also don't understand how this was over 1mb.. I've watched animations with dozens of characters, backgrounds and voices before under 1mb. I mean, it doesn't matter to most of us because no one uses 56k anymore, but still..
I would like to see more from you in the future, I believe you have potential.. Just add more stuff.. Good job.
I'm not exaclty sure why that was 1meg. I went through all the steps of vocal optimization. I do have minimal flash knowledge, so there may be some steps i overlooked to reduce size. Thanks for the positive imput tho :)
Ok but not excellent
Firstly the graphics weren't bad, add a background, a story and understandable speech and this has a lot of potential.
Ummm...it ned a background and some more characters, and a better story, but for a first atempt thats prety good....
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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