Score: 4

"Interesting sentiment..."

by: zenbunny

date: January 23, 2005

The artwork needs some work, but I'll have to give you credit for your visual effects, good idea incorperating photoshop. A couple of pointers: smooth out the frog's movement & draw it's tongue a bit thinner, Have the frog's eyes track the fly. Your audio was a bit overmodulated, keep an eye on your audio levels next time. Try adding some sound effects like a whip crack for the sound of the frog's tongue, and a buzzing that changes in pitch & volume according to the fly's proximity to the frog. If you have a VCR, try recording some cartoons/animation you like & then pause the tape during playback to get a good look at the artwork; this is a way to actually see how some of the little tricks are done to make your art/animation more effective, a simple line here, or a bit of shading there can actually add quite a bit to the whole picture. I found the sentiment at the end interesting. Good luck with your next project.

Score: 10

"wow nice man"

by: Street-Poet

date: May 21, 2004

can u tell me where u learned how to do those effects? or how? thanks!

Score: 7

"((( CUTE )))"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: May 21, 2004

Ha that was cute, good funny flash though, and nice backrounds, the animation could be smoother though, overall it was funny and entertaining, keep up the good flash works...

~X~

Score: 6

"Wow"

by: Demiminigod

date: May 21, 2004

This was great make more great movies ;)

Score: 9

"thats pretty cool"

by: Midgit

date: May 20, 2004

That was a great representation of the quote at the end. I thought your movie was great.

I rarely Review. Your a good flash artist and that was an awesome job.

~MiDGiT