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Apr 17, 2004 | 2:49 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place April 18, 2004

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    Ego City A kid named Johnny has to stop the destruction of his city.

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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.

Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.

Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.

Reviews


AlbesirAlbesir

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

great

it looks like a keeper. It's got a good story behind it and it's a pretty good idea. I'd say you could give the characters more detail, unless they're supposed to be drawn like that(would make sense considering the awkward humor of the series). Keep it going.



Mr-HimuraMr-Himura

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow that was pretty sweet

Good job Eugene, man I loved it!! Me is off ta watch the 2nd one!! Great job!



saadinsaadin

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

KIK ASS MAN



KuzirKuzir

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Cool

Nice humor, good action and animation.
As I've read, you are aware of the audio. The subtitle helped, but better voices would be so much easier (no need to read)... err.. ok, I am lazy :D

Put the part 2 soon :)



DifferentNameDifferentName

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Odd combination

Excellent graphics with everything except the people. You really need to work on the characters graphics. Sure, you're going with a weird anime style that i'm not into, but the least you could do is use curved lines. It was kinda hard to understand their voices, but it definitely helped that you had subtitles. I was still having trouble following the story though... You just sort of jump into it, with a bunch of characters i dont know or care about. Two different ships, and i couldn't tell who was in what, or that one was a villain.


LenZ responds:

well first, I'm trying to be original like drawing characters with no curved lines. Second, the villain was in a big ship which blasted the city. Many people said I jumped into the story with on meaning, well the first part is like a flashback. The next part will be about six mins long with the story in it along with a fighting scene. I promise you that. Anyway thanx for the good comment with a 5 on it_