Score: 1

"Nice list of facts, but horrible horrible cartoon."

by: Aikefu

date: March 1, 2007

The single refreshing aspect of this Flash was the informativeness of the cartoon, but the animation itself was awful.

Here's how to improve it:

* Spend more time on the graphics, give it a little bit more detail, reality, and depth
* Play around with the color saturation instead of having so many completely bright hues
* Give your characters real mouths -- squishing a line up and down does not make for believable dialogue
* Buy a good mic, or at least don't breathe directly into the mic. Almost every line filled with "HGHGHHH!" wind noises.
* Try better voice acting. Practically every sentence was mumbled and it stated in a really boring, monotonous voice.
* Get better jokes. It just...wasn't...funny. At all.

You've got potential; don't let the harsh review get you down.

Score: 8

"I agree with that guy..."

by: jzkornbluh

date: April 17, 2005

Your artistic ability is great...better than me(you'll all see when I submit my next blam). Just score a sound effects thingy...or steal sounds from other movies. Great job other than sound.

Score: 7

"OK, Cody...you have to take the next step!"

by: TheOtherTruth

date: February 19, 2004

This is, like, your fourth movie now.

You have better than average artistic ability, and you seem to have a decent sense of humor.

NOW, you just need to score a sound effects disk, tighten up your work a little bit (this movie was a tad slow) and you are in business.

I KNOW that you are capable of putting out some killer movies that win awards....LET'S SEE IT!

Score: 3

"ehh"

by: KaosKittie

date: February 18, 2004

Kinda boring.. not much to it... slow-paced.. ick.

Score: 5

"It's not really that great."

by: ArseOnToast

date: February 18, 2004

It's pretty boring. I don't really like it.